HEYO


here's something i made for my friend who seems to have 2 wheeled giant metal skateboard called a bmx.


critique or be murdered. (no jk)

pretty good

did you use the write on effect

ya i did, thanks for the lengthy reply lol.

pretty neat. the "chyea" just added to it haha.

the 'chyeah' made me chuckle.

i like it, and the sound effects helped a lot. but a 'ping' noise makes me think of some kind of tin, silver, or metal object. or someone tapping a dinner fork on the side of a wine glass. haha what if you tried a heavy stamping sort of sound for 'bmx'? like something you might hear in a factory or just a big 'thud' sorta sound...

that's my two cents...

thanks for the critiques. im just waiting for canada to wake up and get rid of all this snow on the ground so i can start filming out doors again. it boring here cuz we only have one indoor park, and my basement.

tell me about it, my local park closed a few years ago and since then the closest one is now over an hour away and i don't always have the time or money to drive up there. so i gotta wait it out until the snow melts.